I think the original's much better. You should try to use instruments that don't sound too ear-piercing.
I think the original's much better. You should try to use instruments that don't sound too ear-piercing.
The voices weren't very coordinated, as evident from 0:02 when the different voices started at different times. It wasn't very in tune and the chords didn't click. Good try though.
The bass vocals were good and created a spooky atmosphere. You might want to consider adding more variations such as drum patterns because it gets repetitive.
I'm fairly new to music production, so I wasn't too sure what to do for the drums other than keeping them the same. I'll do my best to be less repetitive next time around.
Thanks for the insight! :D
Repetitive but I enjoyed it. I liked how you used syncopation in the drums.
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